Honestly
 , i think that reading this book AFTER having to read the old man and 
the sea was completely and utterly the worst decision ever ! I mean the 
old man and the Sea put me to sleep in like the first two sentences , 
and now this ? These books are too dry and they're sucking the teenage 
life right out of my teenage brain and is going to turn me into one of 
those annoying adults who read boring books when they were my age and 
grow up to be an extremely annoying person who doesn't do anything but 
sit their and read Mary higgins clark at 4 in the morning . Why can't we
 read more books that relate to this time period , and this generation ?
 Because sooner or later we're going to die of you teachers wringing the
 fun out of our still developing brains (not offence Mr. BG, you're 
awesome) . Unfortunately I still have to write this essay .. I hope this
 paragraph grabbed your attention because i really didn't know how else 
to do so with the lack of excitement towards this book . And that's what
 Mr. BG taught us in English 9F , to grab the readers attention and if I
 couldn't do it the correct way .. Well atleast I tried .
   
 The time period of now , is very different of the way things were 80 
years ago .. If the book "To Kill a Mockingbird" were different and 
written in 2013 I’m pretty sure it wouldn’t be the same . It’s taking 
place in Alabama , one of the most racist parts of the U.S in 1930 and 
all of this was way before the civil rights movement and Martin Luther 
King and all that mumble jumble . So let me fill you in . Back in the 
golden days , children didn’t have cell phones and laptops and facebook ,
 they had themselves , and a few paper dolls . Of course , it was around
 the time of the great depression so no one really had a lot of money . 
The adults gossiped and spread rumors and in this case it fell on the 
shoulders of the kids , and they were mostly affected by the thoughts 
being put in their tiny little children heads . Ew .
Boo
 Radley was made out to be this big evil man who was mutated and ugly 
and creepy . When in reality he was a good guy who wouldn’t hurt a soul 
unless he had to defend himself . All of the drama over him kept him in 
his house for decades . So basically everyone judged something they had 
never seen .. They told their kids to stay away from the house , and the
 kids went and made up dumb stories that the whole town believed and 
this made Radleys life miserable before he ever decided show his face . 
Do you think they would have done this if they could have texted Boo 
Radley or facebooked him saying , Yo Radley , are you a monster from 
another frickin dimension ? I think not ! I'm pretty sure if they had 
this thing called a cell phone all this mumble jumble bull about him 
being this creepy little man would have been squashed long before 
someone got hurt . Can i get an A Men ? 
Another
 example , racism ! The time of this book was taken place before the 
civil rights movement and therefore there was a lot of racism . In the 
book a black man was being accused of raping a white woman . Now let me remind 
you hes black . The evidence didn't add up but the jury still found him 
guilty . Even though it wasn't true .! You wanna know why ? Cause he’s a
 nigger to them . Harsh right ? Well , look at the times now , if the 
court had technology to find DNA , they wouldn’t have been able to 
wrongly accuse him . But since it was a white womans word against a 
black mans word , AND the whole jury of WHITE people , he was wrongly 
accused , cause hes black . This made it hard on Atticus's reputation 
because he was a white man , defending a black man in a racist southern 
town but he was taught that everyone is equal and that is exactly what 
he taught his kids . But unfortunately his bad reputation for 
representing the case falled on his kids , and put them in an unsafe 
position . 
In
 the book , To kill a mockingbird , Jem and his sister didn't really 
have much entertainment but eachother . Malibu barbie and her super 
awesome surfer boyfriend Ken wasn't exactly invented so they had to find
 a way to stay occupied . But at times they got bored , and when you get
 bored it leads you wide open to get in trouble . Now I'm not saying 
they did get in trouble , but im pretty sure there's a law clearly 
stating that you can not step on someone's property . Let a long going 
and running across their lawn and touching their house . But the kids 
found it to be amusing to test Boo Radley , so they did . Little did 
they know , Boo Boo knew what they were up to , and i personally think 
he decided to play with their heads even though it didn't say it 
anywhere . I mean , why else would he have taken Jems pants after they 
were ripped up and left out and sewed them back together and placed them
 on top of the fence where they were abandoned and not leave a name ? 
'Cause he knew it would screw with the kids heads . You can't honestly 
think he was doing it to send signs or something . To me Boo Radley 
seems like a pretty cool dude , i mean , no one folds my clothes for me 
.. 
Well
 , thats the best i have for this essay . Basically the book is telling 
us that life isn't fair .. If it wasnt fair back then what makes you 
think it will be now ? Nothing , because LIFE ISN'T FAIR . And that's 
the end of the story .
 
1. the beginning of this essay starts by talking about the time period. it also talked about what it was like.
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3. i think the essay was very well thought out. i also thing it was organized well,
4. something that could be added is quotes.